Money is proof. Of what? That is the question. Answer it, and you can understand money completely. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.68.34.230 (talk) 18:57, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
Money is proof of having served one's fellow man. Rogimoto (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2008 (UTC)
[edit] GA Review
GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
It is stable.
It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b lack of images (does not in itself exclude GA): c (non-free images have fair use rationales):
Overall:
a Pass/Fail:
[edit] Suggestions
[edit] 1a. There are a few spelling/grammar errors.
4. Liquidity: econmy → economy
Credit: aggregrates → aggregates
Problems with precious metals as money (specie): jewellery → jewelry (if "jewellery is the British spelling, disregard).
Problems with paper as money: bills,Malaysia → bills, Malaysia
[edit] 1b. There are many issues under this criteria.
WP:LEAD states
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The lead should be capable of standing alone as a concise overview of the article, establishing context, summarizing the most important points, explaining why the subject is interesting or notable, and briefly describing its notable controversies, if there are any. It should not "tease" the reader by hinting at important information that will appear later in the article. It should contain up to four paragraphs, should be carefully sourced as appropriate, and should be written in a clear, accessible style so as to invite a reading of the full article.
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WP:MOS states:
"In a heading, capitalize only the first letter of the first word and the first letter of any proper nouns, and leave all of the other letters in lowercase. Example: “Rules and regulations”, not “Rules and Regulations”." Social Evolution of Money, Money Supply, and The Future of Money need to be corrected.
"Avoid the use of links in headings." This is present in all headings below Characteristics.
"Do not assume that your reader is familiar with the acronym or abbreviation you are using. The standard writing style is to spell out the acronym or abbreviation on the first reference (wikilinked if appropriate) and then show the acronym or abbreviation after it, in parentheses. This tells readers they will probably find it later in the text and makes it easy for them to refer back to it."
*Under History, US, UK, and USA make initial appearances. US and UK need to be corrected as per above, USA changed to US. And both wikified.Y Done
*Under Private currencies, United States needs to be changed to US, as per above, and de-wikified.Y Done
(Concerning wikifying) "Redundant links clutter up the page and make future maintenance harder."
fiat money--wikified in History--redirects to fiat currency--wikilinked in Characteristics-It is a store of value.
Barter is wikified in both the lead and Desirable features-To be anonymous.
Gold and silver are wikified in History, Desirable features-To be anonymous, and Modern forms (gold only).
Money supply is wikified in the lead, credit (two times), Money and economy, and Money supply.
In the headings under Characteristics, it is unnecessary that they include numbers. It is understood from the unsourced rhyme that there are four functions, therefore there need not be numbers. Additionally, there really need not be headings at all. They should simply be bold titles like those below Desirable features.
There may be more issues, but I'll stop there for the time being.
[edit] 2a-b. This is a big issue.
There are very few sources for this article... and I noticed that it's been (minimally) tagged for months. Considering its length and the number of topics covered, there should be at least three dozen references. Of the six references that are present now, not one is formatted correctly. One isn't even tagged as a reference; it's listed in text under Characteristics-It is a medium of exchange.
[edit] 2c. Another big issue.
WP:NOR states that an article can have NO original research. You may know it to be true, but that does not make it encyclopedic. If you can't cite a source, delete it.
[edit] Conclusion
The current state of this article disqualifies it for GA. However, considering the importance of the topic, I've requested that it be the WikiProject Good Articles collaboration of the week (COW). Pending the results of that nomination this GA nomination is being put on hold. If the nomination for COW does not go through, the GA nomination will be failed unless there is significant progress in correcting the above issues. The hold period will be no more than seven days. --LaraLoveTalk/Contribs 06:51, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
[edit] GA Review: Missing coverage areas/Further suggestions
[edit] Characteristics of money
It seems to me that there are some key coverage areas that are missing from this article. Each of these above points is probably worth an article in and of themselves, but the main money article should at least let the reader know that these issues have to be considered for a fuller understanding of money.
Taking each of the 4 characteristics, one by one, I note:
Medium of exchange
PPP (Purchasing power parity) not mentioned - this is the theoretical basis for calculating exchange rates between currencies.
role of interest rate in exchange rates
management of exchange rates. Governments (and sometimes private funds or consortiums) attempt to manage the exchange rate. Their methods vary in terms of their method of control and their method of calculating a desirable rate. Methods of control include: rates fixed by government agencies, manipulation of interest rates, manipulation of government spending, purchase of excess currency, sale of currency to increase supply. Methods for calculating a fair rate would include pegging to a more stable currency or commodity, pegging to a currency basket, and various kinds of models based on PPP or national economic statistics.
Unit of account
book value vs market value - two ways of accounting using money. This raises two issues:
the trade off between tracking cash flow (requires book value) vs. real value (requires market value)
objective vs. subjective measures of account (validity of measure)
present vs. future value - factoring in the time value of money
money systems within small groups - small social groups (e.g. kibbutzim, summer camps, prisons, primary school class rooms, residential mental health programs, corporations) sometimes develop private systems to track and/or trade privileges. These are arguably forms of "money" although they do not have liquidity outside of their small social group.
Storage medium
private exposure to currency fluctuations - those not in a position to control rates, try to limit their exposure to fluctuations via hedging using various sorts of currency derivatives.
impact of inflation and deflation - real value vs nominal value
[edit] Neutral point of view
Credit - only discusses why credit should not be counted in the money supply. There is another side to this argument and it needs to be addressed. Credit is in a gray zone because it makes future money available now. If money supply is a measure of purchasing power, credit needs to be included. If money supply is a measure of national assets or wealth it needs to be excluded. If money supply is a measure of economic health it can go either way depending on whether one is more concerned about demand or supply side effects.
[edit] Article organization
I think the article could be made a little easier to read and evaluate if it were restructured. 18 main topics is a bit much. I might suggest the following reorganization based on the four characteristics? An explanation follows.
Historical and social context
Historical forms
Social evolution of money
Linkages between money and other social institutions
Modern forms
The future of money
Benchmark world currencies
Economic characteristics
Money as a medium of exchange
Desirable characteristics
Commodity based standards (e.g. gold)
Money defined by social contract (e.g. paper money)
Money as a unit of account
Desirable characteristics
Market value vs. book value
Present value vs. future value - time value of money
Money as a storage medium
Desirable characteristics
Hedging to preserve value
Impact of inflation and deflation
Physical decay and commodity backed currencies
Liquidity
Money should be anonymous (this is really a liquidity issue)
Managing the national money supply
Tracking the money supply (definition, statistics)
Credit - when is it money?
Private currencies
Economic impact
The historic and social context of money.
The eight sections History, Social evolution of money, and modern forms, future of money, Social and psychological value of money, Linkages between money and other social institutions, and benchmark currencies are really all about how money functions in a historical and social context.
Split as they are into sections top and bottom, the interconnections between these sections are hard to see. For example, overlaps and redundant information in Social and psychological value, Social evolution of money, Linkages between money and other social institutions.
Benchmark currencies are also part of the social and historic context. Some discussion about what makes a currency benchmark might be merited as well. The list is always in flux so principles will be more important than lists.
Economic characteristics of money.
The content of the Desirable characteristics section should be grouped under each of the four characteristics. They are already, but by putting them in a top level heading the conceptual link is harder to see
The section Money#Economic value of money is primarily about the value of different kinds of money as a medium of exchange.
Managing the national money supply.
The four sections Money supply, Credit, Money and economy, and Private currencies are all about how governments do or should control the supply of money within their economy and why. Their content should also be grouped into a single major section.
Credit is really part of a larger discussion of what should be counted in the money supply.
The theorists listed in Money and economy are concerned primarily with the economic effects of the money supply are focused on the money supply internal to the economy as well as what impacts it and how to control it in a way beneficial to the economy.
Money#Private currencies discusses nations granting rights to print money - this also is driven by a country's money supply management policy
I think this is getting too technical here when talking about the money supply. A lot of these ideas can be expanded in money supply or central bank, and probably should. Leigao84 16:49, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
I agree with this proposed reorganisation JQ 08:41, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Source citations
I know this has already been said, but it can't be stressed enough. This article really needs strong secondary source citations - e.g. well respected textbooks and journal articles. Encyclopedic websites aren't probably suitable unless their academic qualifications have been validated.
Egfrank 10:04, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
I've added a few and will try to put in some more when I get time.JQ 08:42, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Sections
As noted above, there are far too many sections. I've merged "social evolution of money" into "history of money". I've also replaced the scrappy future of money section with one on currency unions. One section that should be reduced to a sentence or two, in my view is that on private currencies. Unless someone disagrees, I'll put it into history of money where it belongs. JQ 23:53, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
Good call. I moved the currency union section into the history section, seeing as it is really the next stage. Hope that is OK.
[edit] Private currency section
JQ - sounds right to me, perhaps it should be moved into the History of Money#Representative money section along with the link to the main article on private currencies.
But it may not be a good idea just to copy it wholesale. The last paragraph in particular, is problematic:
The Big Mac index is not an appropriate citation - its a humorous measure of PPP, *not* something backing a currency.
The discussion about currencies backed with energy or other perishables looks like someone might have confused money with derivatives. (Technically even a bank-note backed by a non-perishable commodity such as gold is a derivative. A derivative is defined as any financial instrument whose value is contractually derived from the price of an underlying). So the question is: what differentiates money from derivatives and what currencies backed by perishables meet this standard?
The transaction volume of private currencies needs a citation - if it really is 12b per annum, it probably at least deserves a mention in the money article.
Egfrank 03:30, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
I agree that we need a sentence or so, not a wholesale move. Average daily turnover in global financial markets is around $1.2 trillion [1], so I don't think $12 billion a year merits a mention unless it is put in this context.JQ 07:25, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
Good point. Egfrank 08:23, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Quotes about money
I'm not too enamored by this section. I think it should be taken out? Leigao84 16:51, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
How about replacing that section with a single link to Wikiquote (Money)? --rich<Rich Janis 09:09, 29 July 2007 (UTC)>
[edit] legality...
this article defines money as having to be legally acceptable, yet in the History of money article it lists cigarettes as an example of money. Which is right? Kingturtle 11:56, 13 May 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Types of money
I Boldly deleted this section because it seemed to me to restate material presented earlier in a rather unencyclopedic tone. But I probably should have discussed before doing so.JQ 03:40, 15 May 2007 (UTC)
Tuesday, July 15, 2008
Alternatives to money
Some in the scientific community have viewed money as being an unreliable tool of measurement as regards social and ecological concerns[14], and thus, proposals concerning alternatives to money in the future, may be a prospect.[15] Technocracy Incorporated asserts that Energy Accounting uses a fixed value (energy, thermodynamics) instead of a fiat variable system, and does not rely on growth as most monetary systems presently do.[16] In fiction, Voyage from Yesteryear mentions an "economy" without money.
Money
For other uses, see Money (disambiguation).
Various denominations of currency, one form of money.
Money is anything that is generally accepted as payment for goods and services and repayment of debts.[1] The main uses of money are as a medium of exchange, a unit of account, and a store of value.[2] Some authors explicitly require money to be a standard of deferred payment.[3]
Money includes both currency, particularly the many circulating currencies with legal tender status, and various forms of financial deposit accounts, such as demand deposits, savings accounts, and certificates of deposit. In modern economies, currency is the smallest component of the money supply.
Money is not the same as value, the latter being the basic element in economics. Money is central to the study of economics and forms its most cogent link to finance. The absence of money causes a market economy to be inefficient because it requires a coincidence of wants between traders, and an agreement that these needs are of equal value, before a barter exchange can occur. The use of money is thought to encourage trade and the division of labour.
The word "money" is believed to originate from a temple located on Capitoline, one of Rome's seven hills. On one of Capitoline's peaks, the temple of Juno Moneta stood where the mint of Ancient Rome was located.[4]
Contents[hide]
1 Economic characteristics
1.1 Medium of exchange
1.2 Unit of account
1.3 Store of value
2 Market liquidity
3 Types of money
3.1 Commodity money
3.2 Representative money
3.3 Credit money
3.4 Fiat money
3.5 Money supply
3.6 Monetary policy
4 History of money
5 Criticisms of money
6 Alternatives to money
7 See also
8 References
9 External links
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Various denominations of currency, one form of money.
Money is anything that is generally accepted as payment for goods and services and repayment of debts.[1] The main uses of money are as a medium of exchange, a unit of account, and a store of value.[2] Some authors explicitly require money to be a standard of deferred payment.[3]
Money includes both currency, particularly the many circulating currencies with legal tender status, and various forms of financial deposit accounts, such as demand deposits, savings accounts, and certificates of deposit. In modern economies, currency is the smallest component of the money supply.
Money is not the same as value, the latter being the basic element in economics. Money is central to the study of economics and forms its most cogent link to finance. The absence of money causes a market economy to be inefficient because it requires a coincidence of wants between traders, and an agreement that these needs are of equal value, before a barter exchange can occur. The use of money is thought to encourage trade and the division of labour.
The word "money" is believed to originate from a temple located on Capitoline, one of Rome's seven hills. On one of Capitoline's peaks, the temple of Juno Moneta stood where the mint of Ancient Rome was located.[4]
Contents[hide]
1 Economic characteristics
1.1 Medium of exchange
1.2 Unit of account
1.3 Store of value
2 Market liquidity
3 Types of money
3.1 Commodity money
3.2 Representative money
3.3 Credit money
3.4 Fiat money
3.5 Money supply
3.6 Monetary policy
4 History of money
5 Criticisms of money
6 Alternatives to money
7 See also
8 References
9 External links
//
Article organization
I think the article could be made a little easier to read and evaluate if it were restructured. 18 main topics is a bit much. I might suggest the following reorganization based on the four characteristics? An explanation follows.
Historical and social context
Historical forms
Social evolution of money
Linkages between money and other social institutions
Modern forms
The future of money
Benchmark world currencies
Economic characteristics
Money as a medium of exchange
Desirable characteristics
Commodity based standards (e.g. gold)
Money defined by social contract (e.g. paper money)
Money as a unit of account
Desirable characteristics
Market value vs. book value
Present value vs. future value - time value of money
Money as a storage medium
Desirable characteristics
Hedging to preserve value
Impact of inflation and deflation
Physical decay and commodity backed currencies
Liquidity
Money should be anonymous (this is really a liquidity issue)
Managing the national money supply
Tracking the money supply (definition, statistics)
Credit - when is it money?
Private currencies
Economic impact
The historic and social context of money.
The eight sections History, Social evolution of money, and modern forms, future of money, Social and psychological value of money, Linkages between money and other social institutions, and benchmark currencies are really all about how money functions in a historical and social context.
Split as they are into sections top and bottom, the interconnections between these sections are hard to see. For example, overlaps and redundant information in Social and psychological value, Social evolution of money, Linkages between money and other social institutions.
Benchmark currencies are also part of the social and historic context. Some discussion about what makes a currency benchmark might be merited as well. The list is always in flux so principles will be more important than lists.
Economic characteristics of money.
The content of the Desirable characteristics section should be grouped under each of the four characteristics. They are already, but by putting them in a top level heading the conceptual link is harder to see
The section Money#Economic value of money is primarily about the value of different kinds of money as a medium of exchange.
Managing the national money supply.
The four sections Money supply, Credit, Money and economy, and Private currencies are all about how governments do or should control the supply of money within their economy and why. Their content should also be grouped into a single major section.
Credit is really part of a larger discussion of what should be counted in the money supply.
The theorists listed in Money and economy are concerned primarily with the economic effects of the money supply are focused on the money supply internal to the economy as well as what impacts it and how to control it in a way beneficial to the economy.
Money#Private currencies discusses nations granting rights to print money - this also is driven by a country's money supply management policy
I think this is getting too technical here when talking about the money supply. A lot of these ideas can be expanded in money supply or central bank, and probably should. Leigao84 16:49, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
Historical and social context
Historical forms
Social evolution of money
Linkages between money and other social institutions
Modern forms
The future of money
Benchmark world currencies
Economic characteristics
Money as a medium of exchange
Desirable characteristics
Commodity based standards (e.g. gold)
Money defined by social contract (e.g. paper money)
Money as a unit of account
Desirable characteristics
Market value vs. book value
Present value vs. future value - time value of money
Money as a storage medium
Desirable characteristics
Hedging to preserve value
Impact of inflation and deflation
Physical decay and commodity backed currencies
Liquidity
Money should be anonymous (this is really a liquidity issue)
Managing the national money supply
Tracking the money supply (definition, statistics)
Credit - when is it money?
Private currencies
Economic impact
The historic and social context of money.
The eight sections History, Social evolution of money, and modern forms, future of money, Social and psychological value of money, Linkages between money and other social institutions, and benchmark currencies are really all about how money functions in a historical and social context.
Split as they are into sections top and bottom, the interconnections between these sections are hard to see. For example, overlaps and redundant information in Social and psychological value, Social evolution of money, Linkages between money and other social institutions.
Benchmark currencies are also part of the social and historic context. Some discussion about what makes a currency benchmark might be merited as well. The list is always in flux so principles will be more important than lists.
Economic characteristics of money.
The content of the Desirable characteristics section should be grouped under each of the four characteristics. They are already, but by putting them in a top level heading the conceptual link is harder to see
The section Money#Economic value of money is primarily about the value of different kinds of money as a medium of exchange.
Managing the national money supply.
The four sections Money supply, Credit, Money and economy, and Private currencies are all about how governments do or should control the supply of money within their economy and why. Their content should also be grouped into a single major section.
Credit is really part of a larger discussion of what should be counted in the money supply.
The theorists listed in Money and economy are concerned primarily with the economic effects of the money supply are focused on the money supply internal to the economy as well as what impacts it and how to control it in a way beneficial to the economy.
Money#Private currencies discusses nations granting rights to print money - this also is driven by a country's money supply management policy
I think this is getting too technical here when talking about the money supply. A lot of these ideas can be expanded in money supply or central bank, and probably should. Leigao84 16:49, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
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Contents[hide]
1 Money is Proof
2 GA Review
2.1 Suggestions
2.1.1 1a. There are a few spelling/grammar errors.
2.1.2 1b. There are many issues under this criteria.
2.1.3 2a-b. This is a big issue.
2.1.4 2c. Another big issue.
2.2 Conclusion
3 GA Review: Missing coverage areas/Further suggestions
3.1 Characteristics of money
3.2 Neutral point of view
3.3 Article organization
3.4 Source citations
3.5 Sections
3.6 Private currency section
4 Quotes about money
5 legality...
6 Types of money
7 Types of Money
8 Value of Money
9 Failed GA
10 Article is getting a lot better
11 Monetary Policy?
12 Fiat Money and Savings
13 CRITICISM OF MONEY
14 how much money exists in the world in dollars?
15 Content that should be added back in
16 Historic perspective from outsider view
17 Deferred payment
18 Added a 'criticism of money' section
19 Criticisms of money
20 Alternatives to money
21 future of money?
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Criticisms of money
Proposals for a non market economic system called Energy Accounting which uses a post scarcity type of economy as its basis.[1] http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/The%20Energy%20Certificate-r.htm
The Energy Certificate. (reference)The Technate design as projected, would include such post scarcity aspects as free housing (urbanates), transportation, recreation, and education. In other words free everything, including all consumer products, as a right of citizenship. Energy is used as an accounting system in this proposal and not a reward or punishment societal mechanism. Because some view money as being an unreliable tool of measurement as regards social and ecological concerns, this alternative concept could be an alternative to money in the future.
-end section skip sievert (talk) 21:33, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
A little better, but still too large a fraction of non-market economics and/or Energy Accounting. It's also not really a criticism of money, or even of monetism. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 00:02, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Yes ?... but this is a criticism of money section and I am not sure how more critical than rejecting the idea altogether any thing can get. It is also explained why it is rejected http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/The%20Energy%20Certificate-r.htm The Energy Certificate in the foot note or reference that would go into this segment. Energy Accounting also is an articulate program... developed by some of the very top American scientists of the Twentieth century... Technical Alliance. The part about non market economics does not even have to be in there... but it is connected and relevant. This segment is designed to break the flow of the article in the sense that it is a contrary perspective and critical perspective... so it really can not be in accordance with the body of the article. It is a criticism aspect. This uniquely American criticism and suggestion for an alternative economic system would improve this article. I am not exactly sure how you can say It's also not really a criticism of money, or even of monetism..... Really if you care to follow some of the connected links... it is just about the most overt criticism of money I have ever come upon. Technocracy movement skip sievert (talk) 02:39, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
The concept may be a rejection of money, but what you've copied in any of the articles is only an alternative economic system, at best stating why it might be better. There's no real criticism of money or monetarism in any of the articles...yet. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 06:34, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Pardon but you do not seem to be reading the material presented. You do not seem to understand that this is not a monetary system. It is a different concept which is not only critical of money it rejects money as being not able to work in the future. No real criticism of money ? Huh? This is another reference link that may be good http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/I%20Am%20The%20Price%20System-r.HTM I Am The Price System R. B. Langan Great lakes Technocrat April 1944, # 66 I do not think you read the article on energy accounting http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/The%20Energy%20Certificate-r.htm The Energy Certificate... How any one can not read that and think it is not critical of money I am not sure. However this could be an issue http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:OWN Wikipedia:Ownership of articles... I hope not... but you have not cooperated to create or improve any alternative aspect to this article. Please look up this term ... Price System skip sievert (talk) 15:11, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Criticisms of money
The term price system is used to describe any economic system whatsoever that effects its distribution of goods and services by means of goods and services having prices and employing any form of debt tokens, or money. Alternative proposals for a non market economic system called Energy Accounting which uses a post scarcity type of economy as its basis have existed for some time.(reference link) http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/The%20Energy%20Certificate-r.htm Article on alternative system to money 'energy accounting'The Technate design as projected by Technocracy Incorporated, would include such post scarcity aspects as free housing (urbanates), transportation, recreation, and education. In other words free everything, including all consumer products, as a right of citizenship. Energy is used as an accounting system in this proposal and not a reward or punishment societal mechanism as money could be considered as being used currently. Because some view money as being an unreliable tool of measurement as regards social and ecological concerns, this alternative concept could be an alternative to money in the future. http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/I%20Am%20The%20Price%20System-r.HTM I Am The Price System R. B. Langan Great lakes Technocrat April 1944, # 66 (reference link). skip sievert (talk) 15:24, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Is that the best you can do for criticism: "Because some view money as being an unreliable tool of measurement as regards social and ecological concerns, this alternative concept could be an alternative to money in the future."? If so, then "Alternatives (to money)" or "non-monetary economics" would be a better section heading. (Non-monetary economics is probably a better article title than "non-market economics", though.) I also have a vague memory that some forms of communism propose the elimination of money, rather than merely the centralization of control of money, which they call "credit", but I can't find a reference here on Wikipedia. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 16:40, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
There is no connection to communism and the issues I have brought up. Communism is a Price System that used the Ruble. I wonder that you may not have read the material presented. This article is about money and it is normal to present a critical view of a subject. Not start a new topic or article within the article.... like your suggestion. Am I talking about an article title concerned with non monetary economics here? I do not think so. I did not start or originate any of these articles. I am not interested in renaming that article either. It is not the issue. I am going to add the section. It is not written in stone. I have asked you to help me write it. Please do... but please follow up on the subject of reading the basic information skip sievert (talk) 20:16, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
You (and most people) are confusing the Marx/Engles theory of communism with Lenin's "implementation" in Russia. I was referring to the former. No actual "implementation" has attempted to eliminate money.
I (carefully) didn't check to see who wrote the identical sections in non-market economics, Technocracy movement, Technocracy Incorporated, and others. Eventually, I may get around to it, and trimming all but one to refer to the section in the remaining aricle. On another note, James P. Hogan's novel Voyage from Yesteryear suggests that a non-monetary system could work in the absence of scarcity. (That also provides a social system which created appropriate personal incentives for people to actually do something.) But, still, all we have proposed for content here are alternatives to money, rather than criticism of money. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 23:11, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Well... thanks for leaving the section now. I think it is referenced well. It would seem to me that this essay article, published some time ago, could be considered a scathing negative review of money ... within the context of the addition (Criticism of money). http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/I%20Am%20The%20Price%20System-r.HTM I Am The Price System R. B. Langan Great lakes Technocrat April 1944, # 66.... and this reference point also points toward a critical assessment of money that is pretty stark... # ^ Stabile, Donald R. "Veblen and the Political Economy of the Engineer: the radical thinker and engineering leaders came to technocratic ideas at the same time," American Journal of Economics and Sociology (45:1) 1986, 43-44..... Any way... feel free to edit what I have done if interested... I am going to look at it some more and maybe I can think of a different perspective to come at it. I am not that familiar with Communism as you have written about it. I do know that it is a reactionary concept and a rejection of Capitalism... but since both are similar to each other (price systems) at least as practiced... I was not thinking of adding any communist aspect in the criticism of money section. I know the Communist ideas glorified human labor... and that in a way it is a spin off of Adam Smith in that way, at least as practiced. The main argument against 18th and 19th century economics as near as I can tell... is that purchasing power is destroyed by Technology and particularly energy conversion. Jobs are eliminated by mechanization. It is true that a human can put out about 1/20th of a horse power or about 33 watts... and a machine, even a simple machine like a refrigerator uses about a quarter horse power... and works 24 hours a day.. without complaint, hence productivity is measured in machine and not human power any more. - That article http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/The%20Energy%20Certificate-r.htm The Energy Certificateon Energy Accounting by Fezer also seems to take money to task in a very overt way.
Interesting aside as far as science fiction... the creator of Star Trek.. G.R. was in telephone contact with the head quarters of Technocracy Incorporated on a regular basis and was friends with one of the office managers there in the 60's. I think his name was Berge, now deceased. That is a story I heard by someone in that organization. skip sievert (talk) 00:52, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
The Energy Certificate. (reference)The Technate design as projected, would include such post scarcity aspects as free housing (urbanates), transportation, recreation, and education. In other words free everything, including all consumer products, as a right of citizenship. Energy is used as an accounting system in this proposal and not a reward or punishment societal mechanism. Because some view money as being an unreliable tool of measurement as regards social and ecological concerns, this alternative concept could be an alternative to money in the future.
-end section skip sievert (talk) 21:33, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
A little better, but still too large a fraction of non-market economics and/or Energy Accounting. It's also not really a criticism of money, or even of monetism. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 00:02, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Yes ?... but this is a criticism of money section and I am not sure how more critical than rejecting the idea altogether any thing can get. It is also explained why it is rejected http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/The%20Energy%20Certificate-r.htm The Energy Certificate in the foot note or reference that would go into this segment. Energy Accounting also is an articulate program... developed by some of the very top American scientists of the Twentieth century... Technical Alliance. The part about non market economics does not even have to be in there... but it is connected and relevant. This segment is designed to break the flow of the article in the sense that it is a contrary perspective and critical perspective... so it really can not be in accordance with the body of the article. It is a criticism aspect. This uniquely American criticism and suggestion for an alternative economic system would improve this article. I am not exactly sure how you can say It's also not really a criticism of money, or even of monetism..... Really if you care to follow some of the connected links... it is just about the most overt criticism of money I have ever come upon. Technocracy movement skip sievert (talk) 02:39, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
The concept may be a rejection of money, but what you've copied in any of the articles is only an alternative economic system, at best stating why it might be better. There's no real criticism of money or monetarism in any of the articles...yet. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 06:34, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Pardon but you do not seem to be reading the material presented. You do not seem to understand that this is not a monetary system. It is a different concept which is not only critical of money it rejects money as being not able to work in the future. No real criticism of money ? Huh? This is another reference link that may be good http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/I%20Am%20The%20Price%20System-r.HTM I Am The Price System R. B. Langan Great lakes Technocrat April 1944, # 66 I do not think you read the article on energy accounting http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/The%20Energy%20Certificate-r.htm The Energy Certificate... How any one can not read that and think it is not critical of money I am not sure. However this could be an issue http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:OWN Wikipedia:Ownership of articles... I hope not... but you have not cooperated to create or improve any alternative aspect to this article. Please look up this term ... Price System skip sievert (talk) 15:11, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Criticisms of money
The term price system is used to describe any economic system whatsoever that effects its distribution of goods and services by means of goods and services having prices and employing any form of debt tokens, or money. Alternative proposals for a non market economic system called Energy Accounting which uses a post scarcity type of economy as its basis have existed for some time.(reference link) http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/The%20Energy%20Certificate-r.htm Article on alternative system to money 'energy accounting'The Technate design as projected by Technocracy Incorporated, would include such post scarcity aspects as free housing (urbanates), transportation, recreation, and education. In other words free everything, including all consumer products, as a right of citizenship. Energy is used as an accounting system in this proposal and not a reward or punishment societal mechanism as money could be considered as being used currently. Because some view money as being an unreliable tool of measurement as regards social and ecological concerns, this alternative concept could be an alternative to money in the future. http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/I%20Am%20The%20Price%20System-r.HTM I Am The Price System R. B. Langan Great lakes Technocrat April 1944, # 66 (reference link). skip sievert (talk) 15:24, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Is that the best you can do for criticism: "Because some view money as being an unreliable tool of measurement as regards social and ecological concerns, this alternative concept could be an alternative to money in the future."? If so, then "Alternatives (to money)" or "non-monetary economics" would be a better section heading. (Non-monetary economics is probably a better article title than "non-market economics", though.) I also have a vague memory that some forms of communism propose the elimination of money, rather than merely the centralization of control of money, which they call "credit", but I can't find a reference here on Wikipedia. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 16:40, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
There is no connection to communism and the issues I have brought up. Communism is a Price System that used the Ruble. I wonder that you may not have read the material presented. This article is about money and it is normal to present a critical view of a subject. Not start a new topic or article within the article.... like your suggestion. Am I talking about an article title concerned with non monetary economics here? I do not think so. I did not start or originate any of these articles. I am not interested in renaming that article either. It is not the issue. I am going to add the section. It is not written in stone. I have asked you to help me write it. Please do... but please follow up on the subject of reading the basic information skip sievert (talk) 20:16, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
You (and most people) are confusing the Marx/Engles theory of communism with Lenin's "implementation" in Russia. I was referring to the former. No actual "implementation" has attempted to eliminate money.
I (carefully) didn't check to see who wrote the identical sections in non-market economics, Technocracy movement, Technocracy Incorporated, and others. Eventually, I may get around to it, and trimming all but one to refer to the section in the remaining aricle. On another note, James P. Hogan's novel Voyage from Yesteryear suggests that a non-monetary system could work in the absence of scarcity. (That also provides a social system which created appropriate personal incentives for people to actually do something.) But, still, all we have proposed for content here are alternatives to money, rather than criticism of money. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 23:11, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Well... thanks for leaving the section now. I think it is referenced well. It would seem to me that this essay article, published some time ago, could be considered a scathing negative review of money ... within the context of the addition (Criticism of money). http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/I%20Am%20The%20Price%20System-r.HTM I Am The Price System R. B. Langan Great lakes Technocrat April 1944, # 66.... and this reference point also points toward a critical assessment of money that is pretty stark... # ^ Stabile, Donald R. "Veblen and the Political Economy of the Engineer: the radical thinker and engineering leaders came to technocratic ideas at the same time," American Journal of Economics and Sociology (45:1) 1986, 43-44..... Any way... feel free to edit what I have done if interested... I am going to look at it some more and maybe I can think of a different perspective to come at it. I am not that familiar with Communism as you have written about it. I do know that it is a reactionary concept and a rejection of Capitalism... but since both are similar to each other (price systems) at least as practiced... I was not thinking of adding any communist aspect in the criticism of money section. I know the Communist ideas glorified human labor... and that in a way it is a spin off of Adam Smith in that way, at least as practiced. The main argument against 18th and 19th century economics as near as I can tell... is that purchasing power is destroyed by Technology and particularly energy conversion. Jobs are eliminated by mechanization. It is true that a human can put out about 1/20th of a horse power or about 33 watts... and a machine, even a simple machine like a refrigerator uses about a quarter horse power... and works 24 hours a day.. without complaint, hence productivity is measured in machine and not human power any more. - That article http://www.technocracy.org/Archives/The%20Energy%20Certificate-r.htm The Energy Certificateon Energy Accounting by Fezer also seems to take money to task in a very overt way.
Interesting aside as far as science fiction... the creator of Star Trek.. G.R. was in telephone contact with the head quarters of Technocracy Incorporated on a regular basis and was friends with one of the office managers there in the 60's. I think his name was Berge, now deceased. That is a story I heard by someone in that organization. skip sievert (talk) 00:52, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
Fiat Money and Savings
A suggestion on an interesting point that seems worth mentioning in this article and bringing out in the Fiat money article: As a concept Fiat money tends to work well when individuals acquiring money spend the majority of what they acquire within a relatively short period of time. But when the population at large has a tendency to save a high proportion of their earnings this tends to depress the economy in the long run (a problem China has traditionally had). This, of course, is why laws in some nations restrict inheritance from one generation to the next. All of this, though, would seem counter-intuitive to the average person since, the more money everybody saves, the richer they should be. But obviously, this is not true.
One interesting example of this phenomenon is the spending associated with the retired members of society. Because the money they spend (apart from social security) is derived from goods and services they produced many years in the past, that money is, in effect worthless (i.e. it mostly does not represent any product of any current value to society). Many argue that this is part of the reason that when a large number of people retire the economy becomes depressed. It is also why some people argue that shifting support of retirees to taxes instead of personal savings can actually be beneficial to an economy (controversial but interesting nevertheless).
Anyway, this seems like a significant aspect of fiat money that is less true with commodity money. This aspect is implied but not explicitly brought out in the articles as currently written.
--Mcorazao 23:24, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
I don't see why it should. There is nothing about fiat money that makes it inherently less representative of products or services of value to a society. Since those things are ultimately what back it, and what it can be traded for (two ways of saying the same thing). There's no fundamental difference between saving fiat money, savings bonds, gold certificates, or gold itself for your retirement. Any problems China has with currency lie in how much currency it prints, not in the fact that people save that currency. The currency is devalued only if you print new stuff to replace the old stuff that is out of circulation, pretending that it was destroyed. But if isn't, then you end up with inflation later when it's eventually put back into circulation. But that's your error. The problem is not savings, but failure to allow for savings in expanding the circulating money supply. SBHarris 05:39, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
One interesting example of this phenomenon is the spending associated with the retired members of society. Because the money they spend (apart from social security) is derived from goods and services they produced many years in the past, that money is, in effect worthless (i.e. it mostly does not represent any product of any current value to society). Many argue that this is part of the reason that when a large number of people retire the economy becomes depressed. It is also why some people argue that shifting support of retirees to taxes instead of personal savings can actually be beneficial to an economy (controversial but interesting nevertheless).
Anyway, this seems like a significant aspect of fiat money that is less true with commodity money. This aspect is implied but not explicitly brought out in the articles as currently written.
--Mcorazao 23:24, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
I don't see why it should. There is nothing about fiat money that makes it inherently less representative of products or services of value to a society. Since those things are ultimately what back it, and what it can be traded for (two ways of saying the same thing). There's no fundamental difference between saving fiat money, savings bonds, gold certificates, or gold itself for your retirement. Any problems China has with currency lie in how much currency it prints, not in the fact that people save that currency. The currency is devalued only if you print new stuff to replace the old stuff that is out of circulation, pretending that it was destroyed. But if isn't, then you end up with inflation later when it's eventually put back into circulation. But that's your error. The problem is not savings, but failure to allow for savings in expanding the circulating money supply. SBHarris 05:39, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
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